Late to the game, but this is a nice jump, choosing to recap the same time period from the viewpoint of the "guys." Some nice alternate perspectives and background flesh-out.
Also a nice way to not have to push the narrative forward. You've really dropped the load onto the next writer.
Nice work, Kerrie! I really liked seeing what was happening from the guys' side of things. I also liked how you fleshed out the characters' backgrounds with what we already know from the previous chapter.
Late to the game, but this is a nice jump, choosing to recap the same time period from the viewpoint of the "guys." Some nice alternate perspectives and background flesh-out.
Also a nice way to not have to push the narrative forward. You've really dropped the load onto the next writer.
Moving on!
Side note - there's no "Next Chapter" button. I'm gonna have to jump to Simon Jones' Chapter 8 and start tapping "Previous" to get to Chapter 3.
Nice work, Kerrie! I really liked seeing what was happening from the guys' side of things. I also liked how you fleshed out the characters' backgrounds with what we already know from the previous chapter.
Woohoo!!!!! I'm going to fix myself a strong cuppa and pity Lauren's poor confused English boyfriend. Love the voice!